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高三英语作文 剧本三大忌 1200字

高三英语作文 剧本三大忌 1200字

高三英语作文 剧本三大忌 1200字

高三英语作文 剧本三大忌 1200字

English Composition Script three taboo 1200 words
以下是此篇初一英语作文的英文翻译版:
1. Write a play instead of a novel

Screenwriting and fiction writing are two very different things, you know, the purpose of screenwriting is to express a series of images in words, so you want the people who read the script to see the words and instantly associate them with a picture that will bring them into the world of animation. Novels are different. In addition to writing pictures, he also includes lyrical sentences, rhetorical devices and descriptions of the inner world of the characters. That's not supposed to be in the script. To take a simple example, in the novel there is a sentence like this:

"Today, the students are very nervous waiting for the results, Xiao Ming said goodbye to his parents, then went to the school to receive the result notice. The teacher handed out the report card, Xiao Ming thought: if this is not qualified, it is not good.

He is very worried, afraid that he will not know how to face his family if he fails the exam..."

Imagine if you wrote the above sentence in a script, and you asked the actor to see how to express it in action.

If a script were to express the same idea, it would have to be as follows:

"In the classroom, the students were sitting in their seats, with nervous expressions, looking at the teacher standing outside. The teacher had a stack of grade notices in her hand, and she looked at one of them and shouted, "Chen Daxiong!" Nobita immediately went out to get his report card. Xiao Ming was in a corner of the classroom, rubbing his hands constantly. He looked out of the classroom, and the picture gradually returned to the scene of that morning. Xiaoming's parents sat in the hall early in the morning, Xiaoming put on his school uniform, ready to go out, looked at his father, and looked at his mother, see their serious faces, do not know what to say. Xiao Ming's father said: "Will you pass?" Xiao Ming said, "Yes... It will."

"Chen Xiaoming!" The teacher's loud voice brought Xiao Ming back to reality from the memory. The teacher looked at him with Xiao Ming's report card in his hand, and Xiao Ming stayed for a while before he walked out quickly to get it..."

2. Tell the story with words

The script should not have too much dialogue (unless it is necessary for the plot), otherwise the whole story will become disjointed, lack of action, and the audience will look like listening to reading the script, so boring. For example, if the script is written as follows:

Xiao Ying asked Xiao Ming, "What do you like to eat?"

Xiao Ming said: "I like to eat eggs and cheese soil."

Xiao Ying asked, "Where are the chips?"

Xiao Ming said, "No."

Xiao Ying asked again, "Where's the chocolate?"

Xiao Ming said, "I don't like it either."

Xiao Ying asked, "Why?"

Xiao Ming said, "Because eating chips and chocolate is not good for your health. And eating cheese and eggs can make the body strong.

Read the above script, do you feel very boring, the image will only see Xiao Ying and Xiao Ming ask and answer. However, if it is changed to:

In the kitchen, there is a lot of food, Xiao Ying looked at the pile of food, and asked Xiao Ming: "What do you like to eat?"

Xiao Ming picked up a bag of soil and an egg, nodded to Xiao Ying said yes. Xiao Ying picked up a bag of French fries and asked, "What about this?" Xiao Ming shook his head. Xiao Ying picked up another packet of chocolate and asked, "What about this?" Xiao Ming shook his head and waved his hand this time. Xiao Ying frowned and asked, "Why?" Xiao Ming pulled up his sleeve to reveal a baby mouse on his arm and said: "Because eating eggs and cheese can grow bigger, and chocolate and chips are not helpful."

3. The story has too many details

Many people write too many details in the script, there are a lot of characters in the details, interspersed with a lot of scenes, which makes the story complicated, the audience may not understand, not clear what the author wants to express the theme. Imagine if there were a dozen important characters in a movie at the same time, and there were a lot of stories between the characters, you could ask the audience to remember each character so clearly in a short time.

In fact, there is a saying in screenwriting: "Simple is the best!" The simpler the story, the better. Think about all the good movies you've seen, and do they have simple plots? For example, the movie Titanic is only about a big ship sinking, and the sinking of the male and female protagonists fall in love. Other movies, too, are so simple that a newspaper article can outline the story in just a few dozen words.

But simplicity is always the hardest: "Simple is difficult."
以下是汉语原文带重点词汇注释版:

1. 写剧本而不是小说

剧本写作和小说写作是完全不同的两件事,你知道,剧本写作的目的是用文字表达一系列a series of;的图像,所以你希望读剧本的人看到这些文字,立即把它们与一幅图片联系起来,把他们带入动画的世界。小说则不同。除了画外,他还包括抒情的句子、修辞手法和对人物内心世界的描述。剧本里不应该有这个。举个简单的例子,小说中有这样一句话:

今天,学生们都很紧张地等待成绩,小明告别了父母,然后去学校接受成绩通知。老师发成绩单的时候,小明想:如果这个不合格,那就不好bad; no good; no chop;了。

他很担心,担心如果考试不及格,他就不知道如何面对家人了……”

想象一下,如果你把上面这句话写在剧本里,然后让演员看看如何在行动中表达出来。

如果一个脚本要表达同样的想法,它必须是这样的:

在教室里,学生们坐在座位上,带着紧张的表情看着站在外面的老师。老师手里拿着一叠成绩通知单,她看了看其中一张,喊道:“陈大雄!”大雄立刻出去拿成绩单。小明坐在教室的一个角落里,不停without stop;地搓着手。他向教室外望去,画面渐渐回到return to; go back to; get back to; recur;了那天早上的情景。小明的父母一大早就坐在大厅里,小明穿上校服school uniform;,准备出门,看看爸爸dad; daddy; papa; father;,又看看妈妈,看到他们严肃的脸,不知道说什么好。小明的爸爸dad; daddy; papa; father;说:“你会通过吗?”小明说:“是的……它会。”

“陈小明!”老师响亮的声音把小明从记忆中拉回了现实。老师手里拿着小明的成绩单看着他,小明愣了一会儿才快步走出去拿……”

2. 用文字讲述这个故事

剧本不应该有太多tanto; troppo;的对话(除非是情节所必需的),否则整个故事会变得become; get; turn into; change into;脱节,缺乏动作,观众会看起来像是在听剧本,如此无聊。例如,脚本如下所示:

小英问小明:“你喜欢吃什么?”

小明说:“我喜欢吃鸡蛋和奶酪土。”

小英问:“筹码在哪里?”

小明说:“不。”

小英又问:“巧克力在哪里?”

小明说:“我也不喜欢。”

小鹰问:“为什么?”

小明说:“因为吃薯片和巧克力对你的健康不好bad; no good; no chop;。吃奶酪和鸡蛋可以使身体强壮。

看了上面的剧本,是不是觉得很无聊,画面里只会看到小颖和小明的问答。但是,如果更改为:

在厨房里,有很多食物,小英看着那堆食物,问小明:“你喜欢吃什么?”

小明拿起一袋土和一个鸡蛋,向小英点头说是的。小英拿起一袋薯条,问道Asktao(游戏);:“这个怎么样?”小明摇了摇头。小英又拿起一包巧克力,问道Asktao(游戏);:“这个怎么样?”小明这次摇了摇头,挥了挥手。小英皱眉问:“为什么?”小明挽起袖子,露出胳膊上的一只小老鼠,说:“因为吃鸡蛋和奶酪可以长得更大,巧克力和薯条没有帮助。”

3. 这个故事有太多tanto; troppo;的细节

很多人在剧本里写了太多tanto; troppo;的细节,细节里有很多人物,穿插着很多场景,这让故事变得become; get; turn into; change into;复杂,观众可能看不懂,不清楚作者想要表达的主题是什么。想象一下,如果一部电影中同时出现十几个重要的角色,并且角色之间有很多故事,你可以让观众在短时间内如此清晰地记住每个角色。

事实上,编剧界有句话:“简单就是最好!”故事越简单越好。想想你看过的所有好电影,它们都有简单的情节吗?例如,电影《泰坦尼克号》只讲述了一艘大船沉没的故事,而沉没的男女主角坠入爱河Love River;。其他电影也很简单,报纸上的一篇文章可以用几十个字概括整个故事。

但简单总是最难的:“简单是困难的。”

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